My teacher,who taught me literature in high school,impressed me so much.Maybe,she is the person that i admire most.
Her name is Hoai An (5)She has a beautiful face at the age of 35 and a sweet voice.She is not only sympatical,sophisticated and enthusiastic...but also has wide knowledge,these make her become our second mother.We love her so much...
We were recieved from her things such as her love,helpful lessons...she taught us everything such as how to live best,how to overcome difficulties,the ways to find fun...(2)In the free time,she often told us stories that we enjoyed attentively ,then inferred from them useful lessons to study(2).
In warm atmosphere's party as we were going to join in the final examination,she intimated to us many things that we won't forget.At finally, each of us cried so much(1), promised that we would try our best and remember funny days at high school.
All of us love her very much(1).
Hello Nhu!
Trả lờiXóathe heading of your blog is impressive.However. you haven't underlined and classified five sentence patterns.Moreover, you haven't set off direct object and indirect object.
The fiveth sentence isn't true grammar.I think you should use structure grammar:
" BE NOT ONLY ADJECTIVE BUT ALSO ADJECTIVE"
It means two words which you want to put into the blank like each other about the functioning.
"Maybe,she is the person that i admire most."
Trả lờiXóa~> i think this sentence should replace the word "that" by "whom", it will make the grammar look better.
"She is not only sympatical,sophisticated and enthusiastic...but also has wide knowledge,these make her become our second mother.We love her so much..."
~> so this is, you should replaced "these" by "those", and "sympathical" by "sympathetical" or "sympathetic".
"We were recieved from her things such as her love,helpful lessons..."
~> i think you should put some word between "her" and "things" to make the meaning clearer, like "We were received from her many things such as...", and it is "received", not "recieved", you should check your spelling exactly next time :)
Try your best :)
thank for meo's comment.I will make efforts to improve my writing.
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